A great novel for teens
4
By TJ@8675309
Interesting story from a young author with a vivid imagination that I’ve enjoyed in another novel of hers.
Unfortunately, a couple of things in her writing were distracting: (1) The author appears to use voice recognition software to record her stories, as evidenced by occasional wrong words. This isn’t s bad thing; in fact, it is efficient and smart. However, when using VR you simply have to take the time to edit for accuracy, which she hasn’t done in either of her novels that I’ve read. (2) She overuses the descriptor “snort” which is an ugly, animalistic word that conjures up images of pigs. A word like “sneer” would be preferable. I’m sure she could find other, more appropriate words in a thesaurus.